uh, nice beat
The rapping really needs some work. The volume leveling is kinda all of the place, the mic for some rappers clearly isn't very good. You also should work on the flow, some parts just seem like talking, or letting the words fall out of your mouth. And it's also pretty monotone, you've gotta make it interesting for the listener.
Sorry to be harsh =]
I really liked the middle, I thought the intro/outro was kind of unneeded, especially for such a short song, and it kind of jumped around a lot, you don't need that much variety in such a small place, but I liked it, nice and electronicky
Epic, I could totally see this being in a movie soundtrack.
It doesn't have anything that special, but i listened to it five times in a row without it starting to get annoying, so that's always a plus.
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